Acid in b/w

If you like, willing to sell for 20M.

 

Big acid text ruins the piece.

I also don't like how you put the bubbles. You should have blurred/burnt the ones on the left.

 

No, it doesn't.

And burning looks ugly with colors. :S

 

Lol?

It's ruining the piece by completely distracting from the main focal point of the tag. Burning doesn't look ugly with colors it only darkens them to help create lighting wich is coming from the top middle.

 

It looks not bad i wouldent pay 20M for it though

 

The focal isn't the person. It's acid. And burning also results in sharpened pixels and an offputting gradient when the colors are already dark (which they are).

 

You need to work on your lighting, depth, placement and blending.
You've got good ideas but your execution is wrong. The coloured balls just look like they've been slapped on anywhere without much thought and the text isn't right for a focal point.

Have a look at some tutorials on planetrenders.net.
There's heaps of good ones for every level.

 

Protect tones at 50% exposure will not sharpen them noticeably.

If the focal isnt the person and its the acid. You have 3 focal points going on.

 

Like said above, good work.

But I wouldn't buy it but I personally also don't have a use for it so idk

 

It doesn't have any depth, the coloured c4ds don't fit in at all and the text is ugly. It's not worth 20M, either. The best artists would make an amazing sig and charge $10 average.

 

Nice one