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  1. Unread #1 - Feb 2, 2011 at 10:21 AM
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  3. Unread #2 - Feb 2, 2011 at 1:04 PM
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    Oversharpened, flare is distracting, effects are quite nice, but no depth/real composition makes my eyes jitter like bitches.
     
  5. Unread #3 - Feb 2, 2011 at 2:14 PM
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    Thanks for the CC, just not the makes my eyes jitter like bitches xD

    Unfortunately the stock was low quality, but I still wanted to use it.. so the outcome is a bit weird like you say :p
     
  7. Unread #4 - Feb 2, 2011 at 5:57 PM
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    I've seen this stock. Not much at all has been done to it at all mate :\
     
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    I think i've done enough.
    Simplicity can be nice too, I think a lot of effects would ruin this.
     
  11. Unread #6 - Feb 2, 2011 at 6:34 PM
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    All I see done is a gradient/curves and a light source.

    I agree on the simplicity can be nice, But if you're going to post something for CnC It should have more effects,etc.
     
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    Light source is too strong. I agree with the others, I think you could have done more with this, and still kept it simple.
     
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    Theres not much to it, but what you did change from the stock made it worse :S
     
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    I agree, the light source is too strong. Makes the bubbles to bright
     
  19. Unread #10 - Feb 7, 2011 at 1:47 AM
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    Over sharpened, light is to bright, and I don't like the glare.
     
  21. Unread #11 - Feb 7, 2011 at 6:22 AM
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    I don't agree. Creating something on photoshop isn't all about how much layers and effects you get down.

    For OP the tag looks nice, but I can't really make out what's in it. Well I saw the original stock so I get the picture now but maybe you should try to make it more cleat. Oversharpened like said before ^
     
  23. Unread #12 - Feb 7, 2011 at 7:07 AM
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    Agreed I've seen beautiful 4 layer signatures, making a signature doesn't have to be complex and if you think that then you should look a little more into graphics ;P. Anyways, this signature has its flaws and I listed above what I think they are, which is about all you've done with this stock.
     
  25. Unread #13 - Feb 7, 2011 at 3:48 PM
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    This is true, but like I stated above there is no need to post something with minimal work done for critique as there is nothing to critique on.
     
  27. Unread #14 - Feb 7, 2011 at 4:43 PM
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    Agreed, but if you post up your work on GFX ShowCase people will Critique it anyways. I honestly think it is a good sig from what you have done. I just think you overdid the little effects you have. If the lighting was a bit lower and not sharpened as much, I think this signature would look nice even if simple.
     
  29. Unread #15 - Feb 7, 2011 at 5:31 PM
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    Thanks for the comment Saito, I know I would get CnC like this though.. but it's always good!
     
  31. Unread #16 - Mar 22, 2011 at 6:31 PM
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    Pretty nice
     
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