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Nathan III · #1 08-31-2009, 03:33 PM

C&C Welcome

#2 08-31-2009, 05:59 PM

Hm, interesting design, but firstly, the "grid" type pattern in the background kind of ruins the reality of it, since the flow and curvaceous nature of both fire and water are constricted in the grid. The blending of the two is also decent, though it could be improved, and the fire could have a more natural colour to it - more warm orange and yellow colours

Good job!

Nathan III · #3 09-01-2009, 12:14 AM

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Originally Posted by T R 1 B A L

Hm, interesting design, but firstly, the "grid" type pattern in the background kind of ruins the reality of it, since the flow and curvaceous nature of both fire and water are constricted in the grid. The blending of the two is also decent, though it could be improved, and the fire could have a more natural colour to it - more warm orange and yellow colours

Good job!

Both are meant to reprisent the element, not necessarily be a realistic image of each.
I agree about the colours, I'll change that.
Thank you

Kiabin *BANNED* · #4 09-01-2009, 02:17 AM

I think it may need a bit more sharpening and contrast. I can't stand large pieces without contrast or a nice element of brightness. I suggest to take all of the CC from so far and listening to it.