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w000t · #1 10-10-2010, 03:07 PM

#2 10-10-2010, 03:27 PM

The focal certainly needs to be sharpened to bring focus to her face (particularly her eyes in this picture, as they are looking straight forward). Also, moving her between 0.5 and 1 inch to the left or right would make for more interesting composition as those are closer to the power points to which the eyes are naturally drawn. If you have no clue what I'm on about, refer to the rule of thirds, which is applicable to any visual art. I love the use of the contrasting yellow and purple.

w000t · #3 10-10-2010, 03:46 PM

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Originally Posted by Verts

The focal certainly needs to be sharpened to bring focus to her face (particularly her eyes in this picture, as they are looking straight forward). Also, moving her between 0.5 and 1 inch to the left or right would make for more interesting composition as those are closer to the power points to which the eyes are naturally drawn. If you have no clue what I'm on about, refer to the rule of thirds, which is applicable to any visual art. I love the use of the contrasting yellow and purple.

Thanks and i completely forgot about sharpening and the thirds

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Skizzed *BANNED* · #4 10-10-2010, 03:53 PM

Verts, you don't need no damn focal, as long as Megan Fox is on there, why the shit do you need a focal? Just saying.

I love it, nice work, w000t.

#5 10-10-2010, 05:23 PM

Verts is correct, if it weren't right in the center it would look better but it's great already as it is so no worries.

w000t · #6 10-10-2010, 06:40 PM

added more versions

#7 10-11-2010, 02:22 AM

The 4th one down is the best imo. Good to add the other versions though.

Kiabin *BANNED* · #8 10-11-2010, 05:38 PM

The flow is weird. It's going in many different directions. The sig itself looks burned. And you should sharpen it. Make some with less coloring. Use some plain colors and see how it looks.

w000t · #9 10-11-2010, 08:18 PM

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Originally Posted by Kiabin

The flow is weird. It's going in many different directions. The sig itself looks burned. And you should sharpen it. Make some with less coloring. Use some plain colors and see how it looks.

I don't really see what you are talking about on the flow. It seems to me that its pretty defined but i guess its personal opinion.

Thanks for the critique tho.

Haunted · #10 10-11-2010, 08:19 PM

Lighting seems to brushed on, try to avoid this.

Kiabin *BANNED* · #11 10-12-2010, 02:01 PM

There's a wireframe to the right. That's what's screwing up the flow. It's a distraction to the focal. It's making me look there instead of the actual flow of the sig. Which I'm guessing it was intended to be left? Not sure, but yeah.

GFX | Justin · #12 10-12-2010, 08:32 PM

^ Yeah, the wireframe seems a little to sharp, and is one of the first things I notice. So blur that a tad, and maybe cut back a little bit on the lighting, seems like it was just "blobbed" on there.

But nice piece, love the FX :P