Re: Latest work! DONT CLICK
The anime one is extremely chaotic and hard for the eye to focus in on the render without your eyes being drawn away to the many effects. I do hate the text, it ruins flow and in V2 you can barely see your name. The first one is kinda cool but it just looks like you blurred out a stock background and put some effects onto a render, which should be lightened a little so that the whole thing doesn't blend into the background.
6/10 - Good show of technique, bad composition.
Hope this helps.
Oh yeah, and lighting but this is a whole other ball park.
Last edited by Emperor_Nero : 09-30-2010 at 08:47 AM.