Originally Posted by NaughtyGFX
I didn't do a lot on this one, but it's wip, I sharpened and added clipping masks + brushes, c4d. Gradient maps etc. Didn't really know what to do with the background.
Horizontally far too spaced out - the whole shape takes up most of the signature, and frankly it's too large for your eyes to focus on. Clippings on the right side should be more blurred to represent foreground blur.
Colours could be more vivid, experiment with coloured layers on hue or colour setting/curves layers.
Lighting is vague, could be better defined.
more effects needed, composition isn't too interesting.